this is another of the poems I want some feedback on, trying to figure out which of several to use on a school project.
need to know if these are good enough to consider using for the project or not, basically
preveiw image is a photo of a hail stone taken by candlelight because the electricity was out due to the hailstorm, and though it was mid afternoon it was too dark outside for a photo because of the storm
Comments
BlackHawk049 Says:
nice job dude u should deff use this ^^
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
I think it would help me, as far as project advice, if I knew what the assignment called for.
Alexiel Krahe Says:
The cut of the last few lines (And generally through the poem) is just in the right place, I think. It feels very honest. Simple, as if you were actually talking to the other person.
doc tor nec ros Says:
You're actually an alright poet. It's so scary seeing some form of poetry on the internet that isn't angsty.