Dec 31st 2004
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This is the second story i made for Chelsea. I didnt have the time to fix anything so i m posting the chat where i made this.
Look... my english sucks and please... try not do care about it.
Again... Its an Yaoi story for the Yaoi luvers On Sheezy.
See ya
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Artemis Says:
...well piss !! thats one of the most clever poems things ever!!!!! EVER!! i love it !
slashersivi Says:
Woo, Another Pedro y Saulo pic, mrr... makes me happeh. xD Can't wait to see this.
Grey Fox Says:
^~^ i luv this story ;.; its soo god i "can't" bite it ;.; *literaly starts crying and is goingto cry hisself to sleep*
elle Says:
I like that story! It's very sweet and full of conflict. I like how you set it up to look like a narrative poem, too!
Shivir Says:
I've seen a good one, but can't remember the title!!! Oh well, make a movie of that story and I'll be just as happy
hobbs Says:
awww i love it
its v good and also that picture goes v well.
nehoo i really liked it and you should turn that into a full book im sure it would be great! lol :)
its really good im gonna fav it :)
DaNoodleBox Says:
the transcript idea is very interesting. Is it possible to italise actions and descriptions like they do in chats?
Endustrial D Says:
Awww, what a nice story! ^^ Dang Ally woman!
anyway, you write well! 'Tis a really great story. Can't wait to read another one of yours! 
Booky Says:
*winces abit at the attempt at poetry*
It's an interesting storyline, a little cliche in places, and a bit predictable, but otherwise good.
SkyesDream Says:
i remember seeing the pic on da ^^ great story!