Jack & Steve

by marcio

in Completed Works

< 'The models' by marcio

Jack & Steve

Jack and steve
are best friends
Jack is the rebel punk
always alone
very skinny
blue eyes
and white hair
cheeto says: oooh
Steve is a football player
but
hes not the macho type
only to his friends
he s Jacks best friend
since they were kids
cheeto says: mm hmm :3
jack see his dad kill his mom
cheeto says: oo;
and him and stevy
kicks his ass
and the guy goes to jain
the first time jake cryed
was in front of his moms grave
cheeto says: awww
stevy holds him
and
they kiss
cheeto says: :3
some guys see that
and Steve kicks his ass
and tell his not gay
Jack gets mad
and tell him to fuck off
cheeto says: oo;
Stevy starts to go after Jack every time he can
and tell him that he luvs him
Jack tells him that if he luvs him
he gotta show people that
but
cheeto says: aww
Stevy cant
stevy cries
and thell him
if he do that
ogrewithin: he could lose his chances to get pro
cheeto says: aww
ogrewithin: Jack tells him to stay away if he doesnt luv him more than fucking football
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: some time passes
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: Stevy gets in College Football
ogrewithin: Jack is a Singer now
ogrewithin: he looks like the guy from MUSE
ogrewithin: a band
cheeto says: cool
ogrewithin: one day
ogrewithin: Jack finish a show
ogrewithin: and then
ogrewithin: when he enters the room
ogrewithin: (stars room)
ogrewithin: Stevy is there
ogrewithin: Jack acts cool
cheeto says: heh
ogrewithin: and dont talk to him in a good way
ogrewithin: Stevy tells him
ogrewithin: he is getting married
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: to a girl
cheeto says: oh no oo;;
ogrewithin: Jack looks at him and almost cries
ogrewithin: but
ogrewithin: he acts cool
ogrewithin: Stevy gets close to him
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: tell him
ogrewithin: he still luvs him
ogrewithin: but
ogrewithin: jack
ogrewithin: tells him
cheeto says: aww ;-;
ogrewithin: to go away
cheeto says: oh no ><
ogrewithin: stevy almost cries
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: tell him that he misses jack
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: go away
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: A common friend, Sarah
ogrewithin: tells jack
ogrewithin: that Stevy
ogrewithin: always luved him
cheeto says: awww ;-;
ogrewithin: and every day
ogrewithin: cried
cheeto says: ><
ogrewithin: thinking about Jacky
ogrewithin: Jack tells he
ogrewithin: her
ogrewithin: crying...
ogrewithin: that he luvs him
ogrewithin: but
ogrewithin: he hurt his feelings
ogrewithin: long ago
ogrewithin: and now
ogrewithin: Stevy is sleeping with a girl
cheeto says: oo;;
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: he s going to get married
cheeto says: ><
ogrewithin: Sarah tells him
ogrewithin: that stevie
ogrewithin: stevy
ogrewithin: never slept with her... and told her he would like to wait till they are married
ogrewithin: and Sarah tells Jack
ogrewithin: Stevy didnt sleep with her
ogrewithin: cuz he would never betray Jack
cheeto says: awww
ogrewithin: Jacky cries and
ogrewithin: tell her he needs to see Stevy
ogrewithin: Sarah takes Jack to Steves house
ogrewithin: but
cheeto says: but??
ogrewithin: hehehe
ogrewithin: do you like the story so far?
cheeto says: *nod nod*
ogrewithin: hahah
ogrewithin: ok
ogrewithin: Alison is there
ogrewithin: the future wife
cheeto says: yeah
ogrewithin: Ally tells him
ogrewithin: to go away
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: that Steve hates him
ogrewithin: and dont wanna see his fag friend
cheeto says: ;-; oh no
ogrewithin: Jack tells her to go fuck with a dog
cheeto says: oh my oo;;
ogrewithin: and he wants to see stevy
ogrewithin: Ally calls the security guards
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: cuz she s rich like hell
ogrewithin: and Jack kics everyone s asses
cheeto says: w00t
ogrewithin: cuz he rocks
cheeto says: *nod nod*
ogrewithin: but
cheeto says: but??
ogrewithin: Stevy gets home
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: see jack
ogrewithin: and ally
ogrewithin: Ally goes to Stevy
ogrewithin: and tells him
ogrewithin: that jack
ogrewithin: was attacking her
cheeto says: oo;
cheeto says: stupid bitch!
ogrewithin: steve tell him to go away and never come back
ogrewithin: Jack gets so mad
cheeto says: ;-;
ogrewithin: and go away
ogrewithin: really sad
cheeto says: ><
ogrewithin: Jack is really sad
ogrewithin: and in the wedding day
ogrewithin: he s in show
ogrewithin: but
ogrewithin: in the middle of the show
ogrewithin: he throws his guitar away
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: and go to the wedding
ogrewithin: he kicks every guards ass
cheeto says: ooh
ogrewithin: and very tired and hurt
ogrewithin: he gets in front of stevy
ogrewithin: and ally
ogrewithin: right in the perfect time
cheeto says: yayy
ogrewithin: jack tells Steve that he luvs him
cheeto says: :3
ogrewithin: and he cant live without him
cheeto says: awww
ogrewithin: Ally tells him that he gotta go
ogrewithin: and curse him
ogrewithin: calls him fag
ogrewithin: and stuff
cheeto says: --; stupid bitch
ogrewithin: jack tells steve
ogrewithin: that he luvs him... always did... and always will... even if he doesnt cuz...
ogrewithin: he was there for him when his mom died
cheeto says: awww
ogrewithin: and he was the best man a person could ask for
ogrewithin: Ally slam his face
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: and tells him to go away
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: in the second blow
ogrewithin: stevy stops her hand
ogrewithin: jack is now on his knees
cheeto says: oo;
ogrewithin: cuz he s very hurt
ogrewithin: and stevy tells him
ogrewithin: he could never be happy without him
ogrewithin: and
ogrewithin: football is just a game but jack... was his life
cheeto says: awww
ogrewithin: he takes jack
ogrewithin: and carries him away
ogrewithin: while
cheeto says: yayy
ogrewithin: ally curses him
ogrewithin: and tell him to come back
cheeto says: stupid ally bitch
ogrewithin: Steve goes away
ogrewithin: and he puts the wedding ring on Jacks hand
ogrewithin: and they kiss
cheeto says: awwwwww X3
ogrewithin: THE END

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Dec 31st 2004
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This is the second story i made for Chelsea. I didnt have the time to fix anything so i m posting the chat where i made this.

Look... my english sucks and please... try not do care about it.

Again... Its an Yaoi story for the Yaoi luvers On Sheezy.
See ya

Comments

Artemis Says:

...well piss !! thats one of the most clever poems things ever!!!!! EVER!! i love it !

slashersivi Says:

Woo, Another Pedro y Saulo pic, mrr... makes me happeh. xD Can't wait to see this.

Grey Fox Says:

^~^ i luv this story ;.; its soo god i "can't" bite it ;.; *literaly starts crying and is goingto cry hisself to sleep*

elle Says:

I like that story! It's very sweet and full of conflict. I like how you set it up to look like a narrative poem, too!

Shivir Says:

I've seen a good one, but can't remember the title!!! Oh well, make a movie of that story and I'll be just as happy

hobbs Says:

awww i love it its v good and also that picture goes v well.
nehoo i really liked it and you should turn that into a full book im sure it would be great! lol :)
its really good im gonna fav it :)

DaNoodleBox Says:

the transcript idea is very interesting. Is it possible to italise actions and descriptions like they do in chats?

Endustrial D Says:

Awww, what a nice story! ^^ Dang Ally woman! anyway, you write well! 'Tis a really great story. Can't wait to read another one of yours!

Booky Says:

*winces abit at the attempt at poetry*
It's an interesting storyline, a little cliche in places, and a bit predictable, but otherwise good.

SkyesDream Says:

i remember seeing the pic on da ^^ great story!