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YAOI LUV
This is a story of two guys, both from Japan, in love: Akira Kun and Ren Chan. Akira was kidnapped by the Kyoto's Yakuza Boss, Akamichi Sado. Ren Chan decided to save Akira but he was too weak to make it alone. He decided to look for a strong samurai that could help him get Akira Kun back. Ren Chan finally found ICHIMARU, the strogest samurai in Kyoto. Sado kidnapped Akira kun because he loved him and didn't want him to be with a weak man like Ren Chan. Akira told him Ren chan was not strong but he was the best man Akira could ever find. Sado got mad and locked him in the Main house. After a long travel, Ichimaru and Ren chan were getting closer and they were attacked. Ichimaru killed everyone but he was wounded by a sword. When he woke up, Ren chan was next to him. He was crying but when he saw that Ichimaru was ok, he stopped. Ichimaru told Ren Chan that it was the first time someone ever cried for him. He touched Ren chan and told him Akira kun is a lucky guy. When Ren and Ichi get to the Yakuza's house, they were attacked. Ichimaru won every battle and they finally got to Akira kun and SADO. Sado fought with Ichimaru and after the horrible fight, Ichimaru used his blade and defeated Sado. Akira ran and kissed Ren. Ichimaru got sad but he smiled. Sado stood up and attack Ren chan but Ichimaru got in the way and killed Sado but he also got hit to protect Ren. Ren Chan screamed and held Ichimaru. Ichimaru told Ren Chan to enjoy life with Akira kun and that for a short time... he loved Ren. Ren listened to him and before Ichimaru could finish talking, Ren kissed him and thanked him while crying. Ichimaru smiled and died. Ren and Akira looked at each other crying and went away.
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Comments
Artemis Says:
omg so many names but after teh 2nd time round i got it !! thats pretty spiffy ! that would make a excelent manga!!!!
Booky Says:
Nice summary. It likes you've worked out most of the major points, but have you given any thought to the minor ones? Like, how does Ren Chan find Ichimaru? And how was Akira Kun kidnapped? And why did Sado love him? If you really want to go anywhere with this, you should be able to answer every question, know each character inside and out.
Yes, I know - I'll bet you didn't expect that my writing's better than my art, and my writing critiques as well. . .

SkyesDream Says:
awww... poor Ichimaru ;-; lovely touching story though *huggle*
You mean the orochimaro in Naruto cause if so you totally spelt his name wrong...unless you ment to....*-*