Your timing's off on the beginnings on a bunch of the lines (and some of the words in the middle of the lines), I noticed that right off the bat.
Also, this song is a tad low for your range (which is understandable since you're a girl and HYDE's not. ).
During the "My wish is over their airspace" and "My life I trade in for your pain" parts, you pronounced your "r"s VERY harshly... more than I think one would do during an English-language song. o0; That just struck me as odd...
And there were the two longer notes (one before the bridge and the very last one of the song) that were... (I'm sorry to say this) horribly flat. D:
I think you can do a LOT better if you let your voice rest, drink some water, and try it again (I've heard you do better before. ;D). Good luck if you do! (I know it's a deceptively easy song - in reality it's a lot harder than it seems!)
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Nickle4aPickle Says:
Your timing's off on the beginnings on a bunch of the lines (and some of the words in the middle of the lines), I noticed that right off the bat.
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Also, this song is a tad low for your range (which is understandable since you're a girl and HYDE's not.
During the "My wish is over their airspace" and "My life I trade in for your pain" parts, you pronounced your "r"s VERY harshly... more than I think one would do during an English-language song. o0; That just struck me as odd...
And there were the two longer notes (one before the bridge and the very last one of the song) that were... (I'm sorry to say this) horribly flat. D:
I think you can do a LOT better if you let your voice rest, drink some water, and try it again (I've heard you do better before. ;D). Good luck if you do! (I know it's a deceptively easy song - in reality it's a lot harder than it seems!)