What They Do

by Neji Luver101

in Completed Works

What They Do

Take my hand
Pull me out.
I will try
Not to shout.
This abyss I'm in
Is half self-caused.
The other credit goes
To people at La Paz.
They put me down
But I agree.
They say mean things,
I let them be.
So really,
I'm the one to bleame.
Why am I so
Scared & tame?

I walk to school with my
Head held relatively high.
When I get there my friends
Raise it as high as they can.
But as the day goes on
Others make it bow low,
For when they hurt my
Friends they hurt me as well.
And when they hurt me I-
Well, there's nothing to tell.
I walked to school with my
Head held somewhat high.
I walk home with it so low
And just wanting to cry.

Freak
I smile
Jerk
I apologize
Loser
I nod
Weird
I ignore
I try so hard
Not to show what
They've caused.
It doesn't matter,
Because the
Bruises & cuts
Are still there.

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Jun 25th 2008
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angst dark and horror do experimental free verse human nature narrative society they youth
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Um, yeah. Here's just a feeling about what the kids at La Paz can do. This one is actually 3 poems combined, so it doesn't really flow. And I know that you guys were treated like this too, ok? And I'm sorry that you were. Sorry if you don't like it.

Comments

The Emperor Says:

hmmm..humanity is so cruel.

Salias Says:

That's really good! And I completely agree with that...it's sad what people do to eachother.

Become So Numb Says:

How do you get words to stay italicized?
Good job!

KyoKuddler Says:

Don't worry about that kind of stuff too much! We had a great experience overall; we had so much fun. So don't let a few dark spots ruin all of the memorues, kay? I know I probably only had like 2-3 annoying situations, but I think I handled them pretty well. I think I just fought back a little, but not too muchm you know? Not oding anything, and doing too much are simply the worst things you can do! So call for advice and help if you need it, stay strong and positive! *hugs* And how did you italicize! I love adding that effect to my poems, but couldn't figure out how to do it on sheezy so I gave up! I thought it was impossible. T_T

KyoKuddler Says:

So many typos:
*memories, *much, *doing
^^