The Secrets Within Me; I Won't Let You See

by KyoKuddler

in Completed Works

The Secrets Within Me; I Won't Let You See

Don't look inside of me,

You're not supposed to see:

Thoughts running through my veins;

The ones that show my pains

I don't want you to look;

To read me like a book,

See locked up emotions,

To get certain notions,

That you can see inside me,

Past a tolerable degree,

Even though, secretly,

I really just want to

Get to know you

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Jun 25th 2008
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angst critique experimental human nature i inside let me not philosophical romance secrets see sensual society supposed to within wont you youre youth
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Idea I just got, some thanks to Siobhan because our ocnversation gave me the idea. ^^ Basically about a girl/ person who is afraid to show her heart and true self to the one she secretly loves back. Somehting like that..

Comments

sniperkitty Says:

deep stuff, man, deep stuff. ROCK IT OUT!
Really, this is very good.

Giil Says:

this is really good.
ik how hard it is to get ppl to notice writing so
GOOD JOB!!
lol but srsly. good job

Become So Numb Says:

This is awesome, great job!

Neji Luver101 Says:

This is win. Totally sweet

Aidda Says:

I like this formatting too Very excellent work.