(.: Flame of Love :.)
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~ It burns with a yearning
It burns with passion a desire, of all lengths
It burns with the feeling, which I have always been learning
It burns with my love’s unlimited strength.
My heart is on fire, with a burning desire,
It flames are strong, and the love its flickers for is not wrong.
As life goes on, the flame continues to burn
No matter what comes in life, a bump, a scrape, or even a turn.
Not even the coldest ice or the dampest rain,
Could put out the flame that burns for you, wait and see.
The flame with forever burn, it will never cause me pain
It lasts for the one I love, it shall always forever be.
No matter where we go or what twists our lives shall take,
The flame shall burn fiercely from this bond and pact we make.
Do you feel the warmth every time we embrace?
Or maybe when we stare, face to face?
It’s the warmth of the loves flame with you I share
Showing that for you I adore, for you that I care.
For better or for worse the flame will burn more than ever,
It shall not stop, not matter course our lives will endeavour.
So our love is ever lasting, when the flame strong and bright,
It provides warmth for you in the day and is a beacon of guides during the night.~[/size]
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Written by Orleans P.Ofori-Brown ~Shadow Dinosaur~ -the Dinosaur KING ❀--
Comments
Daemon6 Says:
Beautifully written. Definite fav. and rate.
Wuteverdude Says:
"Deep, man. o.o
"
Last few words are especially powerful.
Icefyre Says:
I laughed cause this poem is very beautiful
Setsuna Motou Says:
Another good one
MechMario77 Says:
" But what happens when that flame does go out?
the one that caused this flame, is starting to fill you with doubt.
In the times that go and the times that will be...
once things are messed up, it can change you and me.
Things will stay broken, never to be fully repaired,
a broken heart is just that, caused by someone who you thought cared...
Hurt is an understatement to the pain that shall follow,
And turn your soul into an icy hollow.
What can bring back this heart with a flame?
Or do you live the rest of your life with this unbearable pain..."
Excellent work on it man. I have to say, you're writing surpasses mine easily.
Merina Says:
I think you're really good at writing poems.
Charizard Says:
NOW THIS IS A POEM!

FOR MY BELOVED CHARLA
NitroFlash Says:
WTF... This is soo duh...


... AWESOME!!!!!!
Dykrentsu Says:
*sniff* ZOMG!!
ahem, this got front page!!1