Jackson Pollock

by DjVooj

in Completed Works

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Jun 24th 2008
Tags:
alternative asdf easy listening electronica emo pop rock
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104
Comments:
4
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2
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White tombstones on ground of crimson
whisper winds blow ever through them
winds are not too often true (they're)
speaking every word to you
tonight

conscience? situation-weighing.
tipping scales, debilitating,
gaging options, pondering,
measure up to what i need

heart failing in separate places,
skipping beats and flooding faces,
pulse is rising faster, please
take my hand in yours and squeeze

like a Jackson Pollock painting
misdirection leaves you panting
organize this scatter plot
derail my every train of thought

Here: Me, now.
There: You, later.
(Hear me right now, i'm here)

lyrical, windtalker-coded,
black and white to gray eroded,
crossing lines and splitting hairs,
russian routlette, truth, or dare?



©Evan V. (Seeking Solace) 2008

This one's mostly me messing around with autotuners again.

I especially like the lyrics here. (pay attention to punctuation and spelling, it changes the whole meaning of a lot of the words in this song.)


PLEASE, READ THE LYRICS!
enjoy!

Comments

ShootingStar Says:

oh I really like the lyrics and the song but i thought it would be a music intro before the singing began, as the most songs have.

Cyril Says:

Hahaa... very poppy. I like the lyrics. The verse chord progression is... used a lot. hahah, good job though. It's a nice song.

BlueEyes Says:

This song is very good, I especially like the lyrics and how you sang them fleetingly (correction?).
The only thing I want to mention is that the song starts too quickly. Perhaps it would sound better with a short intro or something? Oh well, it's your decide. ^^
Anyway, nice work!

D s F a E Says:

Awesome. I love this