Mind Abuse By God...

by DevilDemonKyrm

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Mind Abuse By God...

Tell me a story,
Dear Azriel.
Tell me a reason,
My Gabriel.
Tell me why,
Oh sweet God.

Tell me why you were never there,
Tell me why you made everything unfair.

Why was it I that suffered so,
Why was it me that can still grow?

Tell me a story,
Dear Azriel.
Tell me a reason,
My Gabriel.
Tell me why,
My dear sweet God.

If everything fit in place,
Why am I the one with scars on my face.

If everything was right to begin with,
Why was it I that always came in fifth.

Tell me a story,
Dear Azriel.
Tell me a reason,
My Gabriel.
Tell me why,
My dear sweet God.

Why is there hatred within my mind,
And why do I feel the need to bleed all the time?!

If everthing was fine to begin with,
Why is it I that always comes in fifth.

Tell me a story,
Dear Azriel.
Tell me a reason,
My Gabriel.
Tell me why,
My fitful God.

You gave me no reason to hate,
Everything but fate.

I can't stand to look at you,
Father that was untrue...

Take me away,
Dear Azriel.
Give me a truth,
My Gabriel.
Forsaken by you,
My fitful father untrue...
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Mature Dec 30th 2004
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This is a reference to my late father (the one I had before I got adopted). God is actually my father and the angels represent people (Azriel and Gabriel) people that took me away from him after they found out what he was doing.

So, enjoy.

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TheFlawedOne Says:

Wow this is really good. I liked it a lot. It sounded really good when read outloud.

Tye Says:

Beautifuly written.
This has feeling and that makes it so much better.