Pride of the Many, I did it long ago, before I was able to record well. So now I redid it with my synths that I have and stuff. It's almost the same, but I'm sure you'll be able to tell the difference.
Joan: I turned the Distortions down. lol
VOTE 5!!!! (plz... :() 
Comments
DesLacoda Says:
Very nice! A up rating for you as I listen. but there is something missing in my mind. Perhaps the synth could be abit more meaty to mix better with the guitars.
Perhaps, if you can, Add a compressor to the Drums to make them stand out more in the breakdowns.
oooh, just got on to 2:20, that was abit more like it, more meatier sound.
Like the speeding up.
maybe seperate the strings into two tracks and seperate their pan.
Loving the ending section though! fuckin' class!
I think I'll fave.
glmathgrant Says:
Pretty friggin' sweet and rawkin' and kick-ass and other words.
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DesLacoda's comment is undoubtedly more helpful, but unlike him, I don't actually know a darn thing about music, like, at all.
Toprongy Says:
Really really nice! Good composition with good sounds, except for the synth, it's a bit annoying at times. Overall it's very good. Cheers.
Xoryn Says:
I quite like it. Nice trebley tone on the bass that cuts through pretty well. Guitars sound good also. Though the drums could do with a bit of a volume boost they seemed to get lost in some of the busier parts.
Also, I think the synths need to blend a bit more. At the moment they sound too separate and don't sit well with the rest of the instruments.
Keep up the good work, I voted up.
mr4y Says:
Nice one. But some points IMO:
But it's perfect.
-The strings and overall keyboard(not just the lead) soud be louder than drums.
-Compression on drums(commented before)
-Nice treble sound on guitars. But make sure that other instruments fill the rest of spectrum,or it'll sound a lot trebly
But on the other hand, the song it's really good! Qite heavy for apop song,
SallyMusic Says:
I really like this, and to me the mix sounds pretty good, I certainly don't think you need to blend the synths any more, as I think the sound could become a bit mushy. My favourite parts are around 2:00, and I love the chord progression at the end, well done!
AngelsDontKill Says:
It appears everyone has been a bit nit-picky about what they think should change and what they already like
I liked everything, but I think that's because I found it all interesting, not focusing on the sound quality. For some reason the synth melodies remind me of middle-eastern music, but the lead guitar reminds me of the Offspring. Oh, and at about 2:50 that sounds a heck of a lot like Metallica's "For Whom the Bell Tolls"
Anyway, great, yet odd, composition
Kitty of the Rose Says:
O_O Amazing! I like it just the way it is!
ProudOne Says:
YOu know, the beginning reminds me a bit of subway to sally; Then it goes to oriental stuff... and then it basically just goes to "Starcaft - Terran 1"