Strawberries

by Eel Nadroj

in Completed Works

Strawberries

Jam equals sweetness

yet the poison juice of the jelly kills all

laying down sick and weak

eatting the strawberry semisolid venom

dying as I try to tell her I loved her

staggering under the red sun as it turns into a crimson berry

the sky turns grey and the blood custard burns me

as she shutters to tell me her lies

ordirnary the bane of the fruit kills

but she just watches me roast yet slow freeze from venomous treat

I pass away into the rosy night

yet the strawberries come out of her mouth

as she suffers from her deception

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Jun 16th 2008
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backery cocos critique romance
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this poem is about lies and deception and dying from it

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Blumoomoo Says:

wow

luckykittymini Says:

This sounds like about lies and lust
And I think this one of my favorites