Guest Comic for "Taiki : The Webcomic"

by aibichan

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Jun 15th 2008
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anime and manga comic expressive fanart human taiki text webcomic
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This is a guest comic for 's webcomic, Taiki: The Webcomic.
See it at: www.taikiwebcomic.com

I need to work so much more on my comic skills. I want to have a better, more flowing sort of comic style. My panels are okay, but I was hoping for something more dynamic. And drawing in normal and chibi with so many characters on ONE PAGE is so tedious! I usually only spend an hour on drawings at most, but its easier for me to keep all the panels on one page than try to puzzle piece them together like some people do. Umm.
I've decided I'll be doing a lot more oneshot pages so I can practice with this screentoning. I think it'll be good for me, and I need to learn how to make better time... SO MUCH. I lost the motivation to work on more than a panel at a time with this thing like five times. xD AUGH.
But at least I got it done on a perfect day!
Happy 2 month, goofy.

art (c) me
screentones (c) aallll over the internet
Taiki/Taiki: The Webcomic (c)

Comments

Taiki144 Says:

BAAABY~ It's the best comic page EVER~ 8D I'm so speechless. @///@ I love it soooo much, you have no idea.

vampire209 Says:

Awww thats so cute nice work on the characters, plot and detail ^__^

Noppis poppis Says:

Oh dear. xD Lovely, just plain lovely.

PsychoCaptain Says:

I'm not familliar with these characters but this comic page looks very good. Nice layout. Really well done drawings, I like how you mixed a more realistic style with the chibi style on the characters.
What I don't like is how jagged and pixely the lines look. I don't know they look like that on purpose, but I have a hard time wiht them nevertheless.
But if you squint a little this is one great comic

MiyokoDosei Says:

I wanna know what happpeennnsssssss so cute!

The Wise Mankey Says:

CHEATERS.

jack h Says:

I used to read this comic. This is awesome!

Yuu Tan Says:

If Aibi and Yuu Tan were in that same closet we'd be already having sex so whoever walking on in would catch the show.

Malikat42 Says:

Tssssch, children.

Heero69 Says:

she'll get another chance... O-o