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A Great Moment For You n Me
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A Poem I whipped together.
It evolved from the previous one
I submitted earlier.
It should be much better.
_Enjoy!!_
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Everything By ME!!
(:._A Heart of Ice _:.)
Comments
Sonro Says:
Nice.
MechMario77 Says:
...im jealous. i feel my poetry is nothin compared to yours now.
*sobs*
I LURVS IT, ITS GETTING FAVED AND RATED!
wolf5674 Says:
When I reading this, I'm thinking, "this would make for some awesome lyrics in a song"
Terrific writing Shadow ^^
Bajita 2006 Says:
Awwwwwzz...
Dang it, with i was as creative as you are in words...
Triple Q Says:
Ok, I will write a love poem now thanks to you.
NitroFlash Says:
THIS IS NOT COOL!!!
> : (
This is beautiful~
;>
This is better than mine ><
Hee, makes me think of water.
sonic sight Says:
Aw, sweet. You did good. It's got rhythm, but it's not robotic in it's presentation. I like it alot. :>
ProudOne Says:
What can i say, it is fabulous!
Kori Says:
Love the ABAB, with the same ending lines.