Sep 12th 2004
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Page 2 - Translation:
Raito: If I couldn't kill you, I had to have you.
Raito: your body, your mind, everything...
give them to me
Well, I'm in a shitty mood now. No one commented on this on devart...I guess it's cause I don't really get around anywhere cause I'm too lazy to comment (and too lazy to submit). Ah well....this took me a while, and there are some things that I don't like about it, but I didn't think it was that bad....and I can't draw smut. I'll have to keep trying....*slumps off*
Comments
Straya Says:
Wow. I like it! Good art too. Keep up the awesome job! ^..^
Shirobi Says:
why wouldnt they the layout is awesome....TEACH ME HOW TO DO COMICS!! i can only ink hehe and do single pics hehe not good at comics, yet, i have tried!
kaname Says:
YOU CAN DRAW SMUT, I BELIEVE IN YOU GO-ANGEL!!!! Just draw a head...then a shaaaaft...
I think if you erased the hair that is hanging down on the left side of his face he'd look more like Raito. His expression is postively insane though. Yumyums!!
...and I don't think Raito looks "western"ish in the last panel...I can't put my finger on what, but yeah, not like the american stuff you hate.
aesiraven Says:
People on DA are deadbeat jerks half the time.
You do any original comics?
Anyway great layout, great tones, it looks way professional for a doujinshi.
Lilith Says:
Excellent angles and texture.
I love how you captured the excitement in their eye and little bits of detail. Lovely.
monkeyjay Says:
Gina this is damn good you crazy bitch.
Raito looks totally insane. haha
no great layout and style. Now I want to make a doujin. Who did the japanese for ya?
tairdragon Says:
wow thats really good, i like the last panel with the look in his eye.. being possesive is what is coming to my mind << but anyhoo its really well done ^^