The panel where she's scoping for cakes turned out great.
Honestly, their lifeless eyes kind of scare me D:. They just stare. MENACINGLY. Like sharks after a baby seal.
But other than that this is great. The panels where you include backgrounds are very detailed and interesting, and again I love what you do with hair.
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lilpiece2k5 Says:
I like this =3
Osaka Bomb Says:
I can see my Sheezy fame steadily rising! It's..it's beautiful!
Little Red is adorable. Sorry, Ota. No hard feelings, eh?
I can't wait to see how this tale ends!
Dark Velox Says:
lmao, the second to last panel is priceless.
GRINACE Says:
I really like your linework!
Angryman101 Says:
The panel where she's scoping for cakes turned out great.
Honestly, their lifeless eyes kind of scare me D:. They just stare. MENACINGLY. Like sharks after a baby seal.
But other than that this is great. The panels where you include backgrounds are very detailed and interesting, and again I love what you do with hair.
nalem Says:
it's so cute it makes my teeth rot
;3;
I love it
Ratio Says:
I love this comic soooo much! =D
deathchip Says:
Remember what I said about the second last panel last night?
zeroaltitude Says:
One day Ota will smite you all.
I love the style in these comics and i hope you keep making them. CB
Also, you linked to part 2 in the description not part 1. :V
DrThallium Says:
I can picture an announcer a la Batman-style going on with the usual "Will our Heroine make it in time?! Tune in next week!"