seasons change

by lykanthrope

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Oct 12th 2004
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Seasons Change:


I couldnt believe my luck
on that warm summer night
to finally feel love struck
someones hand to hold on tight
your eyes gazed in mine
as the stars became bright
I never thought I'd find
the love I felt that night

The leaves had turned red
and dripped towards the ground
like tears, they had shed
we climbed up as they fell down
when I saw you ascend ahead
I lost my grip on it all
but you reached out to me and said
that you would never let me fall

Then the days had grown colder
and snow covered the ground
you pulled me in closer
the heat of passion we found
you held me close like this
on that cold winter night
and we embraced in a kiss
everything in life was right

Suddenly it had become spring
and you were nowhere in sight
I felt like I'd lost everything
cuz you were taken from me that night
and I felt so empty inside
when I looked back upon our lives
and I hugged myself tight
when I tried to say goodbye

So here I am now,
kneeling where I fell that day
as I try to learn how
to live my life this way
I know it will be ahwhile
before I'm able to feel
going through life's trials
as I work up the strength to heal

Comments

StupidGit Says:

*nods* Yesh yesh... splendid work. ^^

BenHo Says:

aww. that makes me sad.

JoeWolf Says:

great job,its cooler than anything

Magatoyko Says:

;_; This makes me so sad... This is worse that a sad movie were the girl would die at the end!

DarkPhyre024 Says:

of course I love this piece mikey.. the feeling in it, the emotion expressed within it. You did a grand job on this one...

the leaves in the spring part of the tree look so awesome!

Demiwolf Says:

nice! great work both of you!

Ruphia Says:

...Wow. It's like you plucked the vision right out of my mind.


I should explain. I spent like three months trying to paint an image, trying again and again and again, and I never got it to work... a couple under a tree, moving from left to right over four seasons reflected by the different states of the tree.

The way you did it is te times better than anything I tried. It's a very beautiful picture, very heartfelt.