Post-accidental call

by Fitos

in Completed Works

Post-accidental call

I wonder what would have happened,
if you, me, him, it,
perhaps, maybe…
It is not certain.

Well, thank God it wasn’t worse.

No, no. Of course I am concerned.
Yes, I’ll buy some.
Yes, the hospital is nice.
No, they do move her regularly.
Alright, I will.

What? Yes. No. Perchance.
Yes, it is.
No, it isn’t.

Yes. No.
No. Yes.
What? Pull it down?
Yes, the nurse did.

Alright.

I love you too.

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May 20th 2008
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accident call experimental
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Well, I decided to try out something new...

I REALLY don't know if I pulled it off or not.

Comments

JelmerBV Says:

I like it.
I like the... lets call it the 'gaps'. There is much you can fill in yourself, however you almost are sure what they porbably say. I like that effect.

Nanook Says:

Stop making me think, goddamnit.

Freakmonger Says:

Interesting. Perhaps motivates me to post my insomniac poem...