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Why The Tears?
Why the tears?
Every time I look at you, you’re sore’n with tears…
Please talk to me, I may not get an answer for years.
Is it me? Do you want me to leave you moan?
Or do you need someone, not wanting to be left alone…
Just say something; I really need to know,
Those tears in your eyes…what’s making you feel so low?
Lookie here! I’m gonna cheer you up!
For im a good friend, friends never give up!
But your still down…the emotional pain stabs like a knife…
Maybe its love, feeling like your not getting any in life;
Just stop it please, I don’t like to see you cry…
Your making me feel blue, as blue as the sky…
So I am here, to wipe away those tears,
Because I know- the end of the bad, slowly nears.
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Comments
TopHatPangolin Says:
Cool!
I liked it! A couple of spelling mistakes, though:
For I'm a good friend, friends never give up!
But you're still down…the emotional pain stabs like a knife…
Angel74 Says:
thats deep
Kiwi Joy Says:
Deathshand14 Says:
very cute!
Daemon6 Says:
Very nice.
Nightstar Says:
i love this. reminds me that they're other people besides me who put feelings into poetry...