Hero arises

by Harkimbo

in Completed Works

Hero arises

Working at the edge of lightning,
Finding it hot as it strikes
It all seems so freighting
When Thunder follows at his end

The flashing light,
The loudly bang
It al seems so bright
As nature sang

Now the house is burning
By the hit, that the lightning made
People are running with buckets of water
Even now that they’re afraid

A man runs out of the burning house
As he screams in pain
Help my wife and children
Before they’re gone in the flame

A hero arises out of the crowd
With a bucket of water
He throws the water out
Like nothing bother

He walks through the door
And flames rise up again
Where they where before
There now is a giant flame

He walks upon the stairs
With the steps falling down
And he reach the upper floor
Where he sees the open door

A woman scared in fear
Protecting her children, that are so dear
He helps them up and in a glance
He sees the open window, he sees a chance

He lift the children up his shoulder
And runs as his back feels like getting older
He jumps in the lake outside
And rises up in pride

He help the kids on their feet
And then the front house collapse by the heat
The woman now fear her own life
Jumps into the lake, just to survive

Everyone is now safe
By the hero, who was so brave

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May 17th 2008
Tags:
angst collapse dark and horror fire flames hero house human nature society
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I don't really know how I came to this poem, I just kinda did. Just started and you see what is became. One of my longest poems ever. Hope you guys like it

Comments

Bajita 2006 Says:

your fictionary brain worked well in this..

i like it as well..

artistauthor4ever Says:

this by far the longest I have read and yet you make us enter the world in this poem as if we were watching a video of a rescue and that brings by far.... maybe a joyful tear or a certain emotion but you hold more realism in all these words.... Good Job!!

Kimiko chan Says:

I really love this poem! I could definetly imagine the scenery going on with your words :3 There were a few grammatical errors but the words are so strong that I understood what you meant to say anyway. Really wonderful poem

Buttkickingphantom Says:

You should publish that here in the US since people could really use something like that.
My grandfather goes to the counsel meetings and this is something they could display in the nearby stations.