I don't really know how I came to this poem, I just kinda did. Just started and you see what is became. One of my longest poems ever. Hope you guys like it
this by far the longest I have read and yet you make us enter the world in this poem as if we were watching a video of a rescue and that brings by far.... maybe a joyful tear or a certain emotion but you hold more realism in all these words.... Good Job!!
I really love this poem! I could definetly imagine the scenery going on with your words :3 There were a few grammatical errors but the words are so strong that I understood what you meant to say anyway. Really wonderful poem
You should publish that here in the US since people could really use something like that.
My grandfather goes to the counsel meetings and this is something they could display in the nearby stations.
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Bajita 2006 Says:
your fictionary brain worked well in this..
i like it as well..
artistauthor4ever Says:
this by far the longest I have read and yet you make us enter the world in this poem as if we were watching a video of a rescue and that brings by far.... maybe a joyful tear or a certain emotion but you hold more realism in all these words.... Good Job!!
Kimiko chan Says:
I really love this poem! I could definetly imagine the scenery going on with your words :3 There were a few grammatical errors but the words are so strong that I understood what you meant to say anyway. Really wonderful poem
Buttkickingphantom Says:
You should publish that here in the US since people could really use something like that.
My grandfather goes to the counsel meetings and this is something they could display in the nearby stations.