Dead Girl Stroll

by Spikesbloodydame

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Dead Girl Stroll

Dead Girl Stroll

Where are you?
Everything is so dark and bare I search but you are no where
I did this to be with you, because without you I was so empty
Empty and alone and I knew that I couldn’t be whole again unless I were with you
You were might light and all that kept me sane
I’d wake up and feel overwhelmed by darkness and you shine through pointing me to the right path
But you can’t be found
Everything here is so dead and empty this is not what I expected
You were taken suddenly and you said there was a bright light and you seemed happy
Only darkness awaited me and these things pulling and a sound
My god the sound still has my ears bleeding
I’m so alone and cold here I should have never done it I should have never ended my life
This is my punishment I realize that now this is, this is my hell
This is not fair I was good, at times I felt alone but you, you were there when I needed you
And god I need you now, here’s my hand take it
Please it’s here for you take it, grab it and let me feel your arms around me once more
So I can feel loved and safe, for just a second more
It’s cold and damp here, everyone’s faces are not like yours or mine
They are different, darker almost to awful to stare upon
I shall take this stroll alone but I will find you
I so hope that you and I get to dance it the place called paradise and get to feel what true happiness is
Until then I shall walk this road until we are hack together again
Your love for me shall be the light to guide my way to you
Leading me to Paradise
Leading me to you.

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Dec 29th 2004
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okay imagine the love you have love is taken from ou so you end your life to go there but do you go their? this is the stroll you may take if you take your life so maybe you might want to think again about loosing a love.

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xenacreed Says:

Your love for me shall be the light to guide my way to you
Leading me to Paradise
Leading me to you.


i truely love that line ...
you just get better and better

your wonderful hun..
::

PoeticallyInspired Says:

Wow, a very emotional, dark, and powerful poem. I love it. Very well written my dear.

Nutamu Says:

As I said in AIM:
WOW!!!

:)