Janine Theora - Looks

Note: I am aware that shading, proportions and anatomy may/will be off. I am still "in training" and still learning to get an eye for such things. I would therefore appreciate advice and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism rather than flaming and bashing.
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Like with the Mewrah picture I submitted a few days ago, some feedback I had on the previous Janine picture made me go back and have another go at it.

As with the Mewrah picture, I decided to use this as an opportunity to try a different look for Janine. I saw a random character with the complete look - sleeveless top, pants and a jacket in a comic a few months back and thought it would work on Janine. Granted I think I may have made the straps a bit to wide when compared to what inspired but I still like the look. I also decided to use her original clothes pallet on the jacket-less look, though I realise I just flipped what she originally had.

Just as I was finishing off shading this image, a friend of mine pointed out the shoulders weren't quite wide enough on both the Mewrah and Janine image and another pointed out the hips weren't round enough. I didn't want to go back and re-do the image again as I was so close to completing it, but it is something I will work on in the future. I also feel I may not have quite got the curve on jacket-less Janine's back right. Finally I think the hand on jacket-less Janine could have done with a bit more work.