Wow I actually started writing, haha. Please make a comment! I love getting constructive criticism. Tell me what you thought or make a suggestion! You can even say something random and I'll be really happy

If you find any grammar errors or typos please tell me! Thank you!
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This is the prologue of Angels, Demons and Tests of Faith.
Summary:
The story is about demons and angels. Satan's grasp on the world is getting stronger every day but his time is getting short. Desperate to have everyone in the world his, he commands his demons to do everything in their power to get the humans to lose their hold on faith and on God.
As the demons lead the humans astray, the angels of the Lord interfere.
"Those angels are always in the way." Satan said, his voice drenched in hatred " Trick them, kill them, seduce them... do anything to distract them and get rid of them."
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Pictures of the characters:
Serenity
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1756059/
Sigorian
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1756163/
** Do you want to show me what you think Serenity and Sigorian look like?? Why don't you try and draw them

That's fine with me! Go right ahead!
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Angels, Demons and Tests of Faith © 4th Watcher
Comments
Quake89 Says:
and you thought this was bad?
pff, tis good much better than anything ive written. there were minor spelling mistakes and i think the paragraph format should be change but this is really good for a first attempt at this story.
though im wondering how this could be a prologue if Serenity dies...
NaTmAmE Says:
hmm.. tank god for books
because this helped me get a image 
TheOwari Says:
Could you...um...summarize? Please? I'm sorry, I have much hard to read...^^''
HavenAven Says:
y'know I actually had a similar idea for a story about a year ago, it was going to be about the last of the angels, who in my story were placed on earth thousands of years ago, having to betray gos. The story would have focused on him trying to rid the world of both god and satan, eventually becoming the only holy diety.

I just realized that it's not as similar to your story than I thought it was.