Hi there Sheezyart.
Well I bring to all of you, a flash movie.
This is Shadow Ball Z, the idea is from me and my inspiration was on Alvin-Earthworm and DBZ.
I hope all of you enjoy it
Why do i have a feeling that you took alvin's FX...
OK.. Animation its good... but DAMN... ANOTHER SMBZ... comeon... Mario , Sonic... yeah... how many more will come out... ?... i just dont get it... Alvin inspires alot ppl and all they do is something with mario / sonic with DBZ POWER (yea really oryginal... and yeah boring and not exciting already)... or even remake smbz...
Dont get me wrong i liked the animation but the numerous amount of SMBZ copies/remakes or bases off (i mean mario sonic and DBZ POWERS...) arent interesting anymore (even only dbz animations aint )
Your animation was superb. Very fast paced and exciting. Your typos and improper grammar took away from a few parts, such as when you forgot to capitalize "I," or when you misspelled some words. I'd just suggest reading your script aloud and using google if you're not sure how to spell a word, though your animation more than made up for this problem. Also, this is more of a suggestion than a complaint, but you MUST find someone to do the epic announcer voice at the end of the episodes.
well, I had discussed this with your time ago, i hope you won't get angry by the offense coments from sprite movie haters because actually SA, NG or other site...are against similar sprite movies, yeah! ok, this is my point:
I really really agreed with DuDuL, it's a nice and decent animation, even if its another Dbz about the same characters (mainly Mario and Sonic stuff)..ok, really good work BUT you almost used all the effects of Alvin, even the Red power that Mecha Sonic used to destroy the Yoshi Island, you made the same with this new robot, the same sounds,the same sprites effects, the same kind of attacks...even... almot the same music. I know you got sick about this, but it's true, as friend I advice you that you should change and create new kind of attacks, even DBZ anime had more different attacks to rip off. The story is different but at the same time is similar in few scenes with smbz:
explotion of Eggdeath = explotion of Yoshi Island
Attacks of Mecha Madness = Attacks of Mecha Sonic
Tornado's sound in the race = punches of mario (with cape) against bowser
the seven rings = the seven emerald chaos (what happened with the shadow balls then???)
credits style = credits style
they are few things, you need new FSX sounds and better sprites. Mystical Forest has many. use them and don't rip the same powers.
ok, i hope this help you someday, keep it up!
nice work
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Comments
I had a sickening feeling when I saw the preview.
When I saw you misspell, "computer" I vomited.
It got worse from there.
A complete lack of Choreography, special effects spammed by the dozens and mis-sized pixels.
Please practice more.
Blake1247 Says:
not that good
thats actually pretty good^^
s Up eRs Had ow124 Says:
Awesome
Suchende Liebe Says:
I thought i left a comment... Oh well...>_>
Actually, it was good. I enjoyed the funny-ness.
DuDuL Says:
Why do i have a feeling that you took alvin's FX...
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OK.. Animation its good... but DAMN... ANOTHER SMBZ... comeon... Mario , Sonic... yeah... how many more will come out... ?... i just dont get it... Alvin inspires alot ppl and all they do is something with mario / sonic with DBZ POWER (yea really oryginal... and yeah boring and not exciting already)... or even remake smbz...
Dont get me wrong i liked the animation but the numerous amount of SMBZ copies/remakes or bases off (i mean mario sonic and DBZ POWERS...) arent interesting anymore (even only dbz animations aint
Silvercanth Says:
Your animation was superb. Very fast paced and exciting. Your typos and improper grammar took away from a few parts, such as when you forgot to capitalize "I," or when you misspelled some words. I'd just suggest reading your script aloud and using google if you're not sure how to spell a word, though your animation more than made up for this problem. Also, this is more of a suggestion than a complaint, but you MUST find someone to do the epic announcer voice at the end of the episodes.
DaN DaRk 1012 Says:
well, I had discussed this with your time ago, i hope you won't get angry by the offense coments from sprite movie haters because actually SA, NG or other site...are against similar sprite movies, yeah! ok, this is my point:
I really really agreed with DuDuL, it's a nice and decent animation, even if its another Dbz about the same characters (mainly Mario and Sonic stuff)..ok, really good work BUT you almost used all the effects of Alvin, even the Red power that Mecha Sonic used to destroy the Yoshi Island, you made the same with this new robot, the same sounds,the same sprites effects, the same kind of attacks...even... almot the same music. I know you got sick about this, but it's true, as friend I advice you that you should change and create new kind of attacks, even DBZ anime had more different attacks to rip off. The story is different but at the same time is similar in few scenes with smbz:
explotion of Eggdeath = explotion of Yoshi Island
Attacks of Mecha Madness = Attacks of Mecha Sonic
Tornado's sound in the race = punches of mario (with cape) against bowser
the seven rings = the seven emerald chaos (what happened with the shadow balls then???)
credits style = credits style
they are few things, you need new FSX sounds and better sprites. Mystical Forest has many. use them and don't rip the same powers.
ok, i hope this help you someday, keep it up!
nice work
shadefalcon Says:
I agree with Dan, but it is still excellent. Just make if suit your style more in the next eps. Keep it up bro.
Aves Says:
please for the love of god, dont use the same voice noises over and over
ITS SO FUCKING ANNOYING