Doujinshi - 'Shut Up'

[For lack of a better title]
I am never doing this again. I'm leaving it to the professionals! ><






Okay... so it could have been a lot worse [grant me that at least] but I screwed up so much... I was inking at school [not a good idea] and people were running around shaking desks and I kept jogging as I inked and wah~~! I got very disheartened And almost scrapped it. ..... But I like the two last frames too much... ^^
In case you can't read the writing, or don't get whats going on heres the run down:

[Note: In the Silver bubble world, Reena is a co-organiser. She's in Mr. Dickinson's employment, and has to go around the various teams during the tournaments, stay with them for a certain length of time, and make sure that everything is okay with the BBA regulations. At this time, she'd been doing her work with Neo-Borg.]

Setting: After one of Kai's matches [pick one]. In the locker room. Reena's doing part of her job and checking that he's okay.
Frame One: Kai: *death glare for no apparent reason*

Frame 2:
Reena: *packing stuff away in the first aid box [YES its a first aid box. *points to scrawl above*]* How're you feeling? You're breathing okay, right?

Frame 3:
Kai: Yeah.
Reena: Good. But... be moe careful next time. Kay?
Kai: Yeah... thanks.

Frame 4:
Reena: *beam* Its okay! I'm supposed to take care of you. That's what people who care about each other do.....

Frame 5:
Kai: *holding Reena's face and pulling her towards him* Shut up for a minute.
Reena: *thrown aback* Wha-? ...*realisation* Oh... ...*flushes* Kai... I...

Frame 6:
Kai: Shh; what did I just say? *kiss*

~FIN~

Thats my first [and last] doujinshi. Until I get some skill. ^^U