This is probably my best poem yet, along with my best manga-styled artwork that I just submitted. For an english assignment, I had fun using the flowery language, and overkilling everything.

I've finally begun to actually use things like alliteration, or be aware of it anyway.

you guys!
Comments
Neji Luver101 Says:
This is really good!
Fanime234 Says:
Awesome work!
noveltywords Says:
Well written in my opinion, I adore the off-rhymes in this piece.
Become So Numb Says:
I like it, it's very well written!