Numb

my mind dazed
my limbs like lead
my eyes blurred
my heart and soul numb

I sit half in shadow,
half in this eerie light
I type wearily and slowly
and am vulnerable and bare

my face is set in stone
for a moment
like a lingering storm cloud
in an area without drought

the piano plays sad and gentle
seducing my emotions
twisting them tactfully
until they shatter into a million pieces

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Apr 12th 2008
Tags:
free verse human nature numb philosophical
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just wrote it...dont hate please

Comments

Retro Blue Says:

I relate to your poem on so many levels. I feel as though my day to day life is describe in what you have written . I also liked the style you used to express yourself.

BlackHawk049 Says:

well since u asked i wont hate it....but even if u din i wudnt, this is vry nice i love how some of ur better work u don think is all that great rly good job on this ^^

Eccentric Says:

No hate... just love

Kazy15 Says:

Nicely written