Note: I am aware of the following things:
* This is a Sonic fan character
* The body shape and proportions may be off
* I have not developed my "Eye for Shading"
I have only been drawing since the start of 2008 and still learning the basics. I appreciate all forms of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism as it will help me get better. However if all you wish to do is flame my lack of skills or my decision to make a Sonic fan character, please leave. By posting on the picture, I hold the right to delete and report any replies I view as flaming.
I actually drew this picture a couple of weeks before doing the Noir one. I modified her left foot as originally it was pointing towards the source of light, giving it an unnatural look (always found feet to be a pain to draw). I also added in various creases and kinks to the clothes to try and give it a more natural look on her body. Finally I changed the style of shading I had previously been using (outlining the lines and using blooms).
Looking back at the picture after some comments about the Noir picture, I realise now that the legs are once again off and the left foot looks a bit small. To be honest I'm rather annoyed I didn't notice those flaws when I was tweaking it but at least it allows me to bare those flaws in mind for future images.
Edit on 09/04/08 - The lines looked off first time around, so I went back to the original flash file, made them thicker. Had to move the colours around a little to get it all to fit but I think the lines look MUCH better now.
Comments
punkprincess111 Says:
nice design :3
Cyber Blade Says:
Hmm ... Maybe add some shading just under her arm, and darken the white's shading a bit. Nice work altogether though dude.
Danj The Hedgehog Says:
Not bad. The eyes and the stance make it look like an SRB2 character. No offense, of course.
KWolf 2K Says:
On one side, her thumb's tucked into her fist, but on the other hand the thumb's on the outside.
That's the only part that really bugs me about this, so good job.