Living Shadow

by Forensik

in Completed Works

Living Shadow

I am with you always,
I am your living shadow.

I'll hold you when you're scared,
Listen to the beating of my heart and become aware.

You are not alone in this world,
I am here with you,
I am your living shadow.

You no longer have to hide,
Take my hand this night.

I will protect you from the nightmares in your head,
Your tears soak my shoulder as the air becomes colder.

You are not alone in this world,
I am here with you,
I am your living shadow.

Breathe with me!
Scream with me!
Do not give up on me,
I believe you are worth saving.

Fly with me!
Cry with me!
We are human after all.

All the mistakes of your life is never worth the coward's sacrifice,
I am there when you lay your head down at night,
Rest peacefully inside these wings I've made just for you,
In your heart I want you to know it is true,
I am always here with you.

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Apr 3rd 2008
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angst living shadow
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This is more emotional than most of my other writings and to be honest I was rather afraid to submit, but then remembered that it's scary reaching out to another when you've only thought of yourself.

Comments

vampire Miyu Says:

this is such a deep and beautifull love poem
wonderfull

mercury yume Says:

so beautiful, I almost cried I think. It feel so personal, so loving. The 'living shadow' at first sounds like a dark concept, but it's shaped as something to caring, and is so appropriate, a dark idea for a a dark situation, but living up to the closeness of its reality, very clever. The wings I suppose are a little random, but seem all the more purposeful and personal for that, and also I have a weakness for wing imagery, as my husband has been holding me in his wings since we first met.

It kind of feels like lyrics, the repetition and the use of exclamation marks (which I would normally find odd, but really worked here as they were used sparingly and therefore seem entirely purposeful). So whilst the 'lyrics' aren't overly complex, very 'readable', they hold so much in all of them, because as usual you've made sure that each line holds a purpose and isn't superfluous.

I'm really glad I took the time to read this this morning, thank yor for being brave enough to share it.