However Brief, a Meeting in a Nightbox

by Nanook

in Completed Works

However Brief, a Meeting in a Nightbox

The crowd is ever jumping
For the music that comes thumping
From her deft fingers; feeling lingers
Loved by saints and loved by swingers

The whole damn world’s a stage
His brand new look is all the rage
We’re only players; say your prayers
The spotlights just love him, through silicone glares

It’s these little chance encounters
(Weak at the knees when ‘round her)
Tempt the tongue; having such fun
They’ll scarce realize that day’s begun

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Apr 2nd 2008
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Nanook wrote you something.
A mood piece. A fragmented piece.
Snapshots in time are worth just that.

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Der Sensenmann Says:

"...Loved by saints and loved by swingers..."
I lul'd.

This is pretty nifty. I've noticed that the majority of your poems are swiftly spoken and catchy.
I like this one in particular, it really delivers a spectacular image to the reader.

However... "...silicone glares..."
I don't quite understand how that phrase even makes sense.
Elaborate?