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Rotten
They hear the insignificant
Phrases that spill from your
Lips as passionate as wine,
But they don't listen to
A single word you say
In grace of their exalted
Ranks of a man-made Eden.
The taste of vomit lingers
In your mouth as they
Repeat your speech, twisted
And turned around like a
Rubber band. You're left
Speechless, unable to
Believe what you said.
They have you convinced,
And they drag you away
From Shangri-La with
Hands painted black.
The heat of eternal inferno
Touches your back and
Silently, you're abandoned.
You become a rotten leaf
Among the flowers in
A lush garden; your cries
Mean nothing. You scream
Without a voice, but in the
Cold vacuum of space, no
One can hear you scream.
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Comments
Alychi Says:
This is amazing. I love the word choice! I'm going to check your other work out now.
Nakai Says:
I really like this you feel as if your there and as if it happened to you or someone you know.
mercury yume Says:
there's some nice imagery in this one, good work, a tad scattered, there's not as much unification as I'd like, but overall an enjoyable read.