Rotten

They hear the insignificant
Phrases that spill from your
Lips as passionate as wine,
But they don't listen to
A single word you say
In grace of their exalted
Ranks of a man-made Eden.

The taste of vomit lingers
In your mouth as they
Repeat your speech, twisted
And turned around like a
Rubber band. You're left
Speechless, unable to
Believe what you said.

They have you convinced,
And they drag you away
From Shangri-La with
Hands painted black.
The heat of eternal inferno
Touches your back and
Silently, you're abandoned.

You become a rotten leaf
Among the flowers in
A lush garden; your cries
Mean nothing. You scream
Without a voice, but in the
Cold vacuum of space, no
One can hear you scream.

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Mar 31st 2008
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angst experimental free verse human nature poetry youth
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How about one more before I lay down and don't get up?

Another poem about human nature. This one's less straight forward than my last one, but it's still not hard to figure out what's up. I'm not gonna spell this one out for you. Have fun guessing.

Read according to punctuation, please.

I wonder who actually read this...

Writing © me

Comments

Alychi Says:

This is amazing. I love the word choice! I'm going to check your other work out now.

Nakai Says:

I really like this you feel as if your there and as if it happened to you or someone you know.

mercury yume Says:

there's some nice imagery in this one, good work, a tad scattered, there's not as much unification as I'd like, but overall an enjoyable read.