Forgiven Talk

by PadawanSerry

in Completed Works

Forgiven Talk

Hello my friend are you okay?
It seems to me that you are crying.
I remember you from long ago.
We have all grown up since then.
You speak of those who have hurt you,
And you are worried that it will be your fault,
If they don't make it through the shining gates?
Why do you blame yourself?
Please don't do that.
It was their choice.
You have forgiven them.
God will do the rest.
If they don't say sorry,
by that final day.
Know that you did not condemn those souls.
They did it to themselves.
Sinning and putting their souls into Hell,
where the angry Satan lies.
He is mad and hurtful,
There is no love and no understanding,
you do not want to be there.
Because I say truly,
You are my friend and I care for you.
> 'Dragon Artists' by PadawanSerry

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Mar 18th 2008
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Really this is like what one of my friends told me one night.
Oddly he was one of the ones who as a boy wasn't the nicest to me.
Amazing how people grow up.

This not what he really said just what I can remember, I was crying a lot and it was hard to hear some of what he said.

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Galloglasses Says:

Thats nice to hear, what were you upset about anyway?

Arbiter K Says:

Beautiful, simply beautiful. This poem is very touching ^^

Whitewyvern Says:

That was very sweet of him. :)

Kiwi Tang Says:

Beautiful.

Major Says:

That was absolutely beautiful. This poem is full of love on so many levels. I love it!