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Rated 5 Stars
Glory is like a circle in the water,
Which never ceaseth to enlarge itself,
Till by broad spreading it disperses to naught. ~William Shakespere
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~www.thedollpalace.com
Username: KaySyn123453
Password: *****
Logging on.......~
I sighed, No messages, there never are though for a few seconds I had dared hope, I Dont understand, My best friend Lily had lots of readers for her storys, I've seen it, but noone listens to me, noone ever dose...
~you have doll mail *Click*
Hi kay, It's Lily, I want to write a new series but I dont know what to write about~
Good for you, for all the world, you could write about a flea and you'd still get 5 stars
~*reply*
Hi lily, another series? your not finished your last one, lol
*send*~
I check my storys again, still nothing, Why are my talents not apresiated?
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Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things that give value to survival. ~C. S. Lewis
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E-mail: KaySyn123453@hotmail.com
Password: *****
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Online:
LilyLuvXXX~
Not Lily, I know shes my best friend, but at the moment I can't Stand her...
~Me4??? Has just signed in.~
Good, someone worth talikng too...
~Me4??? says: Hi, Hows u?~
Terrible, Just terrible, I've been ignored ALL day and my parents are fighting again!
~KaYsYn Says: Fine, u??
Me4??? says: I'm Good ~
Good for you, At least someone has a good life...
~LilyLuvXXX says: Hi kay!~
I'm fine, thanks for asking....
~KaYsYn says: Hi, lily
LilyLuvXXX: U got anyone 2 go to teh dance wiv? Ryan asked me out at skool 2day!~
Lucky you, hes only the person I've been wanting to go out with since, forever!
~KaYsYn says: Thats great! I hope it goes well, i'm not going to the dance
LilyLuvXXX: awwww, y?~
Why?? Do you even need to ask that?? good gods! isnt it obvious!
~Me4??? says: u still on?
KaYsYn says: yea, brb
Me4??? says: ok ~
Why are you even talking to me? I know you hate me, everyone dose, even my "so called" friends....
~LilyLuvXXX says: well, y u not goin?
KaYsYn says: Coz, I'm buisy~
Ha, I wish!
~LilyLuvXXX says: oh, ok
KaYsYn says: look, i g2g, bye
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There is only one thing in life worse than being talked about, and that is not being talked about. ~Oscar Wilde
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You'd think there'd be someone...anyone?
~LilyLuvXXX Has just signed in.~
Oh no, It had to be her
~KaYsYn says: hi, how r u?
LilyLuvXXX says: Im good, Y were u not in skool 2day?~
Oh you noticed did you? Im surprised!
~KaYsYn says: not feelin well~
Your mom would make you stay off school too if your dad got wasted and gave you a new colection of bruses for your face!
~LilyLuvXXX says: awww, 2 bad, hope u feel better soon
KaYsYn says: Thanks, Howd ur date wiv Ryan go?
LilyLuvXXX says: Great, hes soooo, amazin!~
Good for him, pity he has the IQ of a goldfish
~LilyLuvXXX says: and so smart and funny!~
Hahahaha, your joking right? tell me your joking...
~KaYsYn says: That's great, im happy 4 u
LilyLuvXXX says: Wheen r u coming back 2 skool?
KaYsYn says: when i feel beter~
When I can show my face
~LillyLuvXXX says: oh, ok, wer u invited 2 Maggies party, OMG i was, im sooo exited!!
KaYsYn says: thast good, but i wasnt invited~
Like I'd ever be inted by teh most popular girl in school
~LilyLivXXX says: it sounds amazing, she sais she getin a band and a disco and lots of other stuff~
Rub it in my face why dont you
~KaYsYn says: sounds good, u hav a good time~
I hope you fall off a cliff and die...
~LilyLuvXXX says: Thanks Im so sory u couldnt come~
Yeah...right...
~KaYsYn says: tis ok
LilyLuvXXX says: i g2g look after my lil sis byeeee, hop u egt betr soon!~
Thank god your gone, soemtimes, you realy get on my nerves...
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I don't need to manufacture trauma in my life to be creative. I have a big enough reservoir of sadness or emotional trauma to last me. ~ Sting
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Isn't it funny, how in the small hours of the night, when your lying awake, listenign to the constant fighting, the memorys come back to you...
~I'm back from school, I run to my room and push my things infront of the door...
"OPEN THE DOOR YOU F*KING S*LUT, YOUR YOUR D*MN FAULT THINGS ARE WRONG"
Go away... Please God, make him go....
"OPEN THE F*KING DOOR! WHEN I GET YOU GONNA F*KING REGRET THE DAY YOU WERE F*KING BORN"~
It's Like that almost everyday, it has been since I was 5. Once I remeber I had to stay off school for months because he broke both my arms... I've since learned, that no matter how much I beg, It dose not help, Infact it makes it worce...
~Another day, another time...
"Please stop! Your Hurting me!"
"YOU THINK THAT F*KING HURTS!? I'LL SHOW YOU PAIN!"
"Please, Stop...."~
And my mom can't do anything, once she tried to stop him, but he thretened her with a gun, god only knows how he managed to fool them into giving him a licence... Mom gets her share of beatings too, but it's mainly me, I tried to run away, It didn't work, he found me...
~School...
"Kay!? What happened, why are you covered in bruses!?"
"It's nothing... realy..."
"Nothing!? I dont call that nothing!"
"Look, Lily, forget it, I just fell, thats all..."~
Stupid, She beleves that! or pretends to, she dosent care realy, Noone dose, I'm Sick of the world and want it to end. Please let it end...
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Holding on to anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. ~Buddha
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~www.thedollpalace.com
Username: KaySyn123453
Password: *****
Logging on.......~
If i dont say whats on my mind i'll explode
~dollz & Storys *click*
Doll Name: Kay Syn
Story Title: I hate the world
Rant *click*~
The world will pay for what it's dont to me...
~Begin new story *click*
I hate the world
You can start writing Kay Syn's story below:
I hate the world and everyone in it, I hate being ignored, I hate being the only sane one here, I want to be remembered that is why I'm going To take my dad's gun to school and kill anyone who has ever upset me, I AM SERIOUS, I WILL DO IT! TOMOROW THE SCHOOL WILL DIE AND I WILL BE REMEMBERED!
Complete and publish this story *Click~
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LilyLuvXXX~
I have got to get more people....
~LilyLuvXXX says: Hi Kay!
KaYsYn says: hi lily...
LilyLuvXXX says: what wrong?~
I hate you, I hate the world, want me to continue?
~KaYsYn says: jus tierd
LilyLuvXXX says: oh...IM SOOO EXITED!!!
KaYsYn says: what abuot?
LilyLuvXXX says: Maggies part remember~
Of cource, what elce would it be...
~KaYsYn says: oh yea, I got her a pressie tho i wasnt invited~
Yeah, a bullet in the head
~LilyLuvXXX says: That was nice of u
KaYsYn says: thanks ~
And theres one for you too...
~LilyLuvXXX says: what is it?? what u get her??
KaYsYn says: its a secret...
LilyLuvXXX says: awww com on u can trust me, Im ur best friend~
I wouldnt trust you if my life depended on it!
~KaYsYn says: i kno, but its suposed 2 be a surprise
LilyLuvXXX says: ok then
KaYsYn says: dont worry, u will see it~
It will be the last thing you see
~LilyLuvXXX says: ok
KaYsYn says: g2g my mom wants the computer
LilyLuvXXX says: aww, bye then~
And now we say our last goodbyes...
~Sign out *click*~
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Anger has overpowered him, and driven him to a revenge which was rather a stupid one, I must acknowledge, but anger makes us all stupid. ~Johanna Spyri
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~School~
I am ready, I know what I must do....
"I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America, And to the republic..."
Ok, ok...I can do this....
"...For which it stands under God, Indivisible, with liberty and justice for all..."
Justice, thats what I'm doing it for...Justice...
"...The drama club will meet at 2:30 today..."
...Its now or never....
"...The lunch prices cave been raised by 25 cents...."
*BANG*
~The air filled with screams as stdents and teachers alike turned to see A girl staring down at the body of one of her fellow students, gun in hand a blank expression on her face~
It's so...easy...
*BANG*
~By now the room was in uproar, as teachers tried to lead the terrified students to saftey, every so oftend, another gunshot would ring out and another peoson would fall dead or dying to the floor...
It could only have been five minutes from the beging of the shootings, but as the students lucky enough to escape huddled together in the cold, waiting for help to come, searching for their friends, calling their parents, and mouring the dead - How could this have happened? Why would she do this?~
Some got away... Some escaped... but no matter I still got most of the people who deserved it, who made me do this... Thers so much blood.... I didnt expect so much blood.....
~Outside sirens rang~
They come... I'm not getting away with this... Oh Gods, what have I done!?
"Drop the gun and step outside"
I put the gun to my head... I pull the tri-----
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~FIVE STAR KILLER
Six students and two teachers died and four were injured after 16 year old took a gun into school last Wednesday.
Though the police were alerted, They ere unfortunately unable to prevent the eight deaths. The Shooter, Kay Syn, shot her fellow students during Homeroom time, before turning the gun on herself, she died in hospital later that day.
It has now been shown that the shooter had been a member of the website "thedollpalace" and had posted her plans to carry out the shootings on this site, disturbingly enough, the threat was met with approval, even encouragement, from some members of the site, and was subsequently rated with five stars...~
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Comments
Meeko XIII Says:
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I don't have the words to describe this...
It's not bad. No, it's far from bad.
Grammatical errors aside, it's a fantastic story, I got caught up in it.
Great work!
Catgir Says:
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that really does seem real..very interesting story, quite a few errors, but other than that. It is a interesting story.
Grape juice Says:
Yes I have to say that was very well thought out. the way it escalated was brilliant. Get those spelling errors fixed and it'll be awesome.
mercury yume Says:
the escalation was a little weak, but I enjoyed the twist. Massive amount of errors, some can be excused as dialogue, but many need to be fixed. The use of quotes was a nice touch. I suppose the development to homicide was perhaps a large challenge and not something to be taken on lightly.