.:BB Fallen:.

by ChibiDawnie

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Mature Mar 11th 2008
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anime anime and manga batgirl batman beyond boobs breasts dawn dawnie ecchi fanart manga nudity
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She tripped...

Well, she did fall through a window I was doodling as I was watching my brother play Super Smash Brothers Brawl, which is joygasmic, btw, if you haven't bought it, GET IT. It's wonderful.

ANYWAYS...Yeah, I've got Batman Beyond stuck in my head again, as you can see. I had a bit of anatomy probs I think...angles I fail at, and I think I made her hips a little too wide..meh. Oh well. It doesn't look TOO bad.

Btw, I got the glass brushes from :iconScully7491:'s page. Because my glass wasn't working out the way I wanted them to, so I saved myself a headache. .

Amazing brushes *-*

Comments

DarkOmega Says:

-spots her and brings her into my house- :3 now if ONLY I was alone -sigh- >3>

King Pudin Says:

Um.
Convenient how it tore...
O-o

zerorush Says:

Brawl friend code? ;D

Daemon6 Says:

Awesome job on the art. I like this scene showing glass broken everywhere, it gives more of a dramatic shock.

forgottengeisha Says:

That looks painful.
o__O
Good job!

PrincessCosta Says:

good job

tell her to make her outfit out of better fabric

illusion007 Says:

the glass just happen to cut there eh?

Justin Frost Says:

Brawl is indeed a magnificent game

Frostwolf Says:

first of all: it is a amazing piucture! X3
secondly: I think her hips aren't too wide

fortissimo Says:

Hi, I saw your art posted in the anime club. If you have a preferred level of critique, please let me know (the club didn't list any preferences). o_O

The character's hips and torso look OK. Her skull is 'chopped off' a little on the top though, it gives the head a flat appearance on top (with the hair). Rounding out the top/back part of the skull should take care of it. My other suggestion would be to create some definition in the shoulders, at the moment they look like they are coming out of the neck. Show the space of the body that comes between them and the neck. I have a habit of drawing the torso first (usually start with a rough boxy shape) and then go back to add on the shoulders & arms, just think of them as "plugging in" to the torso.

Overall it looks like a tricky pose and I think you did pretty well with it. The way you've CGed the glass is pretty cool. :3