Self Control, Anyone? (Screentone Test Page)

Mature'd for sexual themes, if you're observant. And "HELLO WORLD!" titties, but hey. >W>
*dies*
Yes, this is read left to right. xD I'm not THAT animu, give me some credit.

Firstly:
This is NOT part of ANY REAL COMIC PROJECTS I AM WORKING ON ATM.
This is only a test page. I was playing with screentones, and seeing how they did in photoshop/fireworks/MSpaint, as well as panel positioning, etc. :3 I'll definitely be using Photoshop for the bulk of the screentoning because it was just TOO user-friendly not to, but most of the sound effect text and panel boxes I'll probably put in via Fireworks and MSpaint. ::Hates the stupid shape tools in PS.::
I apologize for the sorta lamely placed text bubbles in the first panel if it throws anyone off, but this entire page wasn't really planned down to the finest detail, it was mostly a fiddling experiment that turned out pretty good, for what it's worth. Screentoning surprisingly takes less time than I thought, but then again, this is only a two-paneled page. I also haven't decided if I want to ink lineart before screentoning it. This one isn't because I was really just testing the tones. I could go either way, or just have really clean pencil lineart. I'd like to make it look nice, but be efficient. So the lines on my real pages won't be this messy no matter what I choose, I think.

ANYWAY~

Yeah. This is based of an RP I'm doing right now... That has lots of sexy butch lesbians and angst and sex and fluff and everythaang. =W= I wanted to screentone those arms, I couldn't help myself. WEWT.
Questions? Comments? Concerns? Opinions? I'd like everyone's opinion. Does the toning look okay? Not too busy? Not too cluttered? Does it draw your eye around the page correctly? I feel I did an alright job on that bit, so I'm content.
I need more SFX fonts though. Dx Will look into.

Bandit (The hot butch one) (C)
(HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY OR SOMETHING LOL)
Ten-Chan (The bottom panel) and Art (C) Me
Screentones/Fonts (c) all over the internet. :< I'll probably put up a "credits" page somewhere on my site when I get that dealt with so you all can know where I get my shits.