My light in the dark

by Eel Nadroj

in Completed Works

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My light in the dark

Walking back from a wooded path
Not so far away from my own house
the blackend darkness streches from here to yonder
leaving me lost and cold
yet as I remember my way back
I think of you
Your warm smile and peaceful yet curious eyes
is the light I need to find my way
as my search leads me in an endless maze
I look at the stars thinking of the moon me and her once laid gaze upon
the moon looks just like she does
Bright and angelic as if she was god's angel
yet still I wonder and think about the good times and bad
I do this to keep me sane
I recall her wisdom and will as she was wiser then a sage yet caring like a yound saint
always putting others before her
brought a tear to my eye as she used to do
but not a tear of saddness but a tear of love
her love got me threw all these mazes in my life and the one I'm in now
as I still walk to get home
I realized her pain
and all she has done for me
it hurts but I do remember me wanting to hold her
as I wish she would as I need her love
yet as I leave the maze and see a dim stray of light
I realize that people as bright as her only come once
and that I took her for granted like I took the route through the forrest
making this my third time
yet as I leave the forest
I see her, I she her in all of her granger
She runs up to me and hugs me
as I apologies for losing myself and almost losing her
she cries and tells me
I love you as always

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Mar 3rd 2008
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Nightstar Says:

*cries softly* this is so beautiful...
your description reminds me of a poem i just posted as well, the swelling of emotion and all that
it's brillantly done... i love this

Eel Nadroj Says:

and KNA indeed is my girlfriends intuels but I won't give her full name but KNA also stands for something else