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MIZU! part1
Part 1
Scene: Mizu's bedroom
It is dark, the only lights are coming from the computer on mizu's desktop computer, which is on the foot of Mizu's bed. strips of paper with strange symbols on them and weapons are scattered in the top right corner of the room, mizu's bed/computer desk is in the left top corner on the top corner of the room, a book shelf is on the left wall.
:visual: Mizu is currently is human form, he is a husky tall build with a rounded face, hazel eyes, bigger nose, short blonde hair, wearing a T-Shirt that has written on it "oh hi! i upgraded you RAM!" he got at a United Planet shop, in blue jeans he got with no socks on, and his working shoes he got from an interplanetary mall/trade center are beside his desk, his new favorite jacket, a blue jean jacket with a symbol for water on the back and front right side he got from a human inhabited planet he visited, is on the floor next to the weapon pile. His closet is between his bed and his book case.
Camera: Watching over Mizu's shoulder
:Mizu: (on computer)
...Save..*Click* Account..*Click* Post art..*Click* Done! now Tails Chan's icon is glitch free! *Smiles then straightens face and looks over to side* Well wasn't that the highlight of my day.. I need to find something else to do...
Camera: watching door
FX: Knocking on Mizu's door
Camera: Side view of Mizu sitting on bed
:Mizu: *opening empty wordpad document* Who is it?
:Camera: Door
:Voice (Lightning): *Through speaker on door* Its Lightning, may I come in or do I get to stand out here and talk through the speaker?
:Camera: Watching over Mizu's shoulder
FX: Mizu sighs and hits a button on the desk and the door opens revealing Lightning
:Camera: middle of room on floor looking up at Lightning, scrolling upwards on his appearance
Visual: Lightning is a Ninja from the Thunder village, which symbol is a lightning bolt. He is human, with two tattoo like seals, one that says Kain on his left and one that says Oblivion on his right. his face is more slender and cornered, he has short jet black hair and black coloured eyes and tanned skin. His headband is on his forehead, he is wearing a tank-shirt with his village symbol on the front and he had baggy fabric pants with his ninja pocket on his upper leg and sandals on his feet, the base colours for this outfit are black and yellow.
:Camera: In front of Mizu
:Mizu: *Looking at Lightning with annoyed voice* What could be so important you grace me with your presence?
:Camera: Side mugshot of Lightning
:Lightning: *Sighs* Thanks for such a warm reception. Now then, Shadowfang needs help with Tipsy.
:Camera: In front of Mizu
:Mizu: *Face palm, annoyed voice* What happened now?
:Camera: Right wall view of scene
:Lightning: Tipsy is eating him feet up.
:Mizu: *Sighs* Let me get my stuff on...
:Camera: View of Lightning waist up
:Lightning: I'll wait outside.
FX: The door closes as lightning walks out of the room. Mizu clicks the log out button on the SheezyArt page and turns off the monitor and turns the light on. He grabs a pair of socks out of his closet, puts them and his shoes on, and puts on and buttons up his blue jean jacket.
Camera: Focused on Mizu's Face
:Mizu: *Sigh* I guess I'm ready. *turns and walks to the door* Why can't all jobs be so great?
Camera: Watching Mizu walk out
FX: The door opens and Mizu walks out. The door closes and the lights go out behind the doors.
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Comments
JellyFish Says:
You love that blue jean jacket, don't ya?
silkbunichiblossoms Says:
at the beginning of the story, i thought you were in your puma forn clicking with one claw at the compueter. O_o

i like how it's in a movie form. it's more descriptive and gives a sense of how to see the events unfolding.
very cool story!