Auguries of Innocence

by ZiggyBuggy

in Completed Works

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Feb 24th 2008
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concept emotional innocence robin
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"To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.

A robin redbreast in a cage
Puts all heaven in a rage"

Links to all the stocks I used can be found here:
http://linkbun.ch/32v

Not sure whether or not it's finished. Tell me?
Crit. is more than welcome!

Comments

Ness Says:

Hmm. It's nice. Whether or not it's done depends on what you're going for with it. Seems diff4erent than most of your stuff.

SuperCow100 Says:

This is nice. n__n
But, May I crit for a moment?
the cage looks to copy and pasted, it shouldn't look so obvious. maybe move it form overlapping the tree?
Asides from that it looks nice.

the broken nightmare Says:

Well, I like the piece, I do, the main idea is astounding but…it could use some work. The cage looks to…out of place for it to really fit as does the tree.

Unless this is the outcome you were trying to come by, I would suggest that you edit it slightly.

I really do like the atmosphere of the piece though, it’s a very neat work of art.

MiyokoDosei Says:

that is freaking awesome!

Jigglesbig Says:

It grips me with a horrible grip of perspective.

The bird is trapped in a cage, all alone, abandoned.

And off topic, one of the clouds looks like a duck's head, I swear.