Excluding the two characters I dumped into the scene for submission to Sheezy Art, this was commissioned for the Company I work for. I would like to give them an updated version when I finally get round to modeling some office workers but who knows when that will happen!
The character textures are weak, and I think the wall monitors could have done with some more intricate geomery but overall I'm happy with this.
Crit's encouraged, always helps for the next project.
Comments
what, youre making a game?
DrRobot Says:
thats pretty nice, i need to get back to finishing my office scene...
shadow nova Says:
umm this might be irrelevant but the camera seems to be too low. to give a nice view of the whole place. you might try wider camera angle horizontally you broader view and you dont have to adjust resolution much. tables could use little more color too
Afrogirl Says:
OMG Dod you secretly work for MI5? lol Looks great. Lots of nice detail
Rubbercookie Says:
That's an impressive looking scene right there. Good job!
If you were to improve it you should add some actual office workers (like you said), improve the ceiling a bit (add geometry?), and stash in various office props.
Coffee cups, pieces of paper, recycle bins, cups with pens in them, photos sticked to screens, random stuff dropped on the floor, et cetera. Just to add that human touch.