You Don't Understand

by rainhelpshidetears

in Completed Works

You Don't Understand

Sometimes people just dont understand
That the worlds not perfect
That it has its flaws

Sometimes people just dont understand
How much they hurt other people
With their critique

Sometimes people just dont understand
that you never learn anything
from being happy

Sometimes people just dont understand
That you should get to know a person
Before you assume anything

Sometimes people just dont understand
that not everyone has a reason
for what they do

Sometimes people just dont understand
that a feeling
doesnt define you

so please listen to what others say
maybe there is a reason they are that way

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Feb 19th 2008
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this is written in response to someone on here who will remain nameless

Comments

KIKI spirit Says:

this is really pretty

Vart Says:

its not me is it?i hope not

doc tor nec ros Says:

comeon name me, you know you want to.

Nightstar Says:

it's a nice piece, i like it

Kithrixx Says:

So you're bitching about someone giving you criticism and taking the first impression that you gave seriously.

Brilliant.

BlackHawk049 Says:

who said wut me an vart will take care of him no prob...killing might b involved but its prolly unavoidable specially w/ me...anyways good poem

vampire209 Says:

perfect suming up ami-chan but who-so-ever says anything other than helpful info is gonna hear it from me *bares fangs*

Atlas Dark Says:

necros happens to be my friend. What did he do anyway?

Nakai Says:

Its true though i do have to agree.

mercury yume Says:

I'm not sure that the repetition really achieves much.