clean version for here, without photoshop's yellow/effects
I was trying to make a kind of serious ambiance, but i think they look stoned instead LOL;;
I'll try to make something more dynamic next. Kind of poster like.. maybe i should add text *ponder*
sorry if stuff looks unnatural, it's rather hard for me to draw back views and closed eyes ;_;
Aigis and Metis from PERSONA 3 FES : http://youtube.com/watch?v=BSsUH6M8xBg
it's a fun rpg , i love the character designs
Comments
KingOfNothing Says:
I love it! insta-fave!!!!
AZNkungFU Says:
Lovely and full of rich details
Hakayoi Says:
they don't look stoned, but intent on whatever they're focused on.
I have no constructive criticism... sorry. But! I love how you drew the arms.
Luminance Says:
Hm, you actually got me to click on something in the crit club.
Hur hur. That's worth something at least! The designs intrigued me. I wish we didn't have to have previews of certain dimensions on Sheezy... it makes it hard to tell if the picture will be worth it or not! BUT NOT YOUR PROBLEM!! 
You said you were thinking about text next time! I would say, be EXTREMELY careful of text on images. If it's a comic, okay, just don't use comic sans. If it's a poster, sure, but make 110% certain that the text is a major compositional element and complement to the artwork. Don't just slap it on there, work with it to make it a beautiful element of the piece, not just a label. But posters do indeed have text, so if you think it'll work well, go for it!
Your anatomy is very anime. I... dislike anime, but I understand. You're pulling it off quite well. Perhaps pull their mouths up a bit in the front view. It should match up with the profile if you drew them side by side in the same perspective and drew lines... um, I hope that makes sense. >_>
Hands have a good form and sharpness, but make sure that the middle finger is the longest, not the index finger. Look at your hands.
Other than that... you could push the shadows/highlights on the metal and the midtones on everything else, but it's not really needed. The hair feels a bit unfinished, but that seems to be consistent with the rest of the colouring style and line quality, so it's not distracting at all.
All in all good job, I like the composition a lot. :)
Eviko Says:
i like the way you've coloured it. nice and bold. i think that makes this a very eye-catching piece. i think the white background is a very nice contrast to the colour of the figures. if you were to put text or something else in it i suggest keeping as much white outlining them as possible,
i like the color choices
Zhector Says:
First piece of Persona 3 fanart I've seen in a long while.
Well, probably ever.
Maichan Says:
You have a lovely style
mrianna Says:
It all looks very very good! :3 The colours are nice and bright and complement the piece well.
You do need to tighten up your lines though, instead of leaving them broken, it's almost distracting. Also, your shadows need to be a little darker and your highlights brighter, this will help give you more dimension!
It's still very lovely and you should be proud of this one!
thecommittee Says:
nice work. really like the details in the gear. ^^