Luna Tala

After joining theblackbloodalliance.com forum I created my first, and main character, Luna Tala. This is her at several stages in her life blah blah. tell me what you think of her and her bio.

Lineart (c) Kay Fedewa

BASICS
Birth Name: Luna Tala
Alias: Tala
Gender: Female
Age: 1 year
Species: red/gray wolf
Height: 3 ft.
Length (nose - tail): 4.5 ft.
Weight: 85 lbs.
Mother: Red wolf (name unknown)
Father: Gray wolf (name unknown)
Siblings: none
Mate: none
Habitat: She's a drifter
Rank: none

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Body Build: slim and delicate
Fur Colors: silver, white, and cream
Eye Color: ice blue
Accessories: none
Main Fur: white
Ears: cream/silver tipped
Eye Markings: very light cream around the edges
Tail: cream/silver tipped
Back: white
Underside: white
Misc. Appearance: She has a tan nose, that adds to her delicate appearance.

PERSONALITY
She's quiet and reserved. She seems to be frightened of her own kind, especially larger males. She has a fondness for young pups, and they seem to be the only thing that will draw her out of her shell. She's extremely afraid of thunder and lightning, but enjoys running in the rain and snow, and playing with caterpillars.

LIFE/PAST
Her father was a gray wolf and her mother a red wolf. Her parents were killed in an attack by her father's brothers who thought the red wolf breed lesser than themselves. She hid under a log until they fled, but by then all that was left of her parents were bones and scraps of meat and organs. After that no one knows what happened to her. She drifts from place to place, looking for someone who'll accept her and possibly keep her uncles at bay.