I need your help!! D:

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Feb 8th 2008
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anime and manga help on perspective phail stick
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Basically, i phail at perspective and so have re-drawn this art for an anime con-book several times, but I want to know which one you guys think is remotely better.

Let's just label the one on the left 1 and the one on the right 2.

Any help is very very much appreciated. And constructive crit would be alright too, but i'll take it on board the next time i'm drawing perspective.

Don't mind the sketchiness, it's gonna be lineart.

Comments

Tockeru L Avian Says:

wow shes hot and sexy

TehD Says:

I think 2 looks better. Don't know why though. I suck at pers. too.

atrum Says:

I think number 2 is better; I like the positioning of her legs more, and the shoulder on number 1 is a bit wonky. They're both really cute though x3 Awesome work, anyway. perspective is super hard, and you did a good job on it.

Void of Rapture Says:

The second one, definately. Shoulders, legs, and the head is alot better perspective.

Shmarties Says:

I think the second one, though both are great. Perspective= annoying!

Kentaromaru Jin Says:

2 is much better, I think that #1's angled leg is off

Nishi Chan Says:

2 is better
and perspective is hard!xo

HimeMarZ Says:

#2 i suck at perseption.

hyperactiveice Says:

2 is better at the unanimous vote.

MiyokoDosei Says:

second one ^^