The other day I showed my brother the original theme:
Take 1, and he liked it. Fortunately, he is to his music what I am to my artwork, so he decided to fix it up a little.
Drums, Bass and Guitar all fixed up - in fact the drums completely redone

Much prefer this version to the previous one, but still: if anyone fancies making their own version, they get a full piece of artwork from me
...I still gotta make this into a full song
Comments
Craze Says:
i'm not gonna lie to u siman....it is alot better ^^
Fazz Says:
this is a good improvement but Id take either one is fine