Syonethis: Reborn Soldier

Ok, I finnaly managed to create a complete character for my story. This is a "Reborn" trooper, from the Arken´Oeyd faction Syonethis.
I thought it turned out great. Please tell me how I could make it better, and I'll see if i can do it.




A little info:

The Arken´Oeyd are a very aggressive alien species that corrupts every habitable world they can find.

Syonethis is one of the dozen allied Arken´Oeyd factions.

The Reborn are a hybrid race of a humanoid ( Things with arms, legs etc, like a human) and pure Arken´Oeyd DNA.

The Reborn are genetically enhanced Arken´Oeyd super-soldiers.

Reborn are very sophisticated.

Reborn are very strong.

The Arken´Oeyd can create Reborn thanks to the Gal´dr, a small beetle-like Arken´Oeyd. It shoots in a small syringe into a humanoid’s spine (They often attach themselves on the target’s neck) and sprays in a poison that sweeps the subjects memories and begins a gene manipulation process.

Before a newly corrupted specimen can enter the ranks of the Reborn, it will need to go through a couple of processes before the Gal´dr poison has completely turned the creature. The first phase turns the specimen into a “Shambler”, a stupid and slow, yet very strong zombie like being. After that phase, it enters the “Howler” phase that raises the speed a bit. It takes about 1-2 weeks for a Shambler to pass on to the next step. After that, the poison tries to balance the strength and speed, lowering the speed a bit, but raising the strength. It’s called the “Crusher” phase. That process only takes a few days. After that, the Gal´dr’s former memories start to enter the subject’s brain. This phase is the last phase as well. When it’s complete, the subject has been completely turned, and is fully allowed into the ranks of the Reborn.

A few other Reborn species: ClawReapers, Stalkers, Behemoths and Scourges, though Scourges and Behemoths are Beasts, but most of them can talk, but all of them can listen and obey orders from Reborn. Stalkers aren’t Reborn either, but they doesn’t fit in the Beast category.

Garzul, Zantsú, Drasemys and Shrasú are the real Arken´Oeyd (Four different types). They are often referred to as “The beasts”, because of their alieny beast look.