Medic 13 (NC)

by mikenter

in Works in Progress

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Jan 29th 2008
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anarchy experimental inc narrative preview suspense tragedy
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This is NC(not complete) but I just wanted to know if you all like the way I did it. Also I'm wondering how you like the first few sentences of the story, I have more written but my Web Design teacher (whom is also a english teacher) is looking it over.

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Bass clarinetgal2708 Says:

I think the way you set it up is fine. And I like the first few sentences. They leave you wondering what happened.