Poem: Wishing For Wisdom.

by Jigglesbig

in Completed Works

Poem: Wishing For Wisdom.

Sometimes, I wish I was a woman,
To be faultless, yet imperfect
To manipulate so simply with so little,
To control with not only my voice, but my body
And make a living of lies.
To be desirable, but to be unloved,
To get away with more than men,
To bitch and moan about man endlessly and not be judged,
But when sexism and resistance come, to oppose, contradict and lie,
And complain, and nag, and moan, and scream
To be the queen of the world I dream
To be kind and evil, to be beautied and flawed,
To take so much, and give so little,
To create so little, to destroy so much,
To have many faces, but to show so few,
To stab the back, and heal the front,
To blame any irrational behavior on the fact that once a month, I bleed.
Perfection was never so flawed.

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Jan 27th 2008
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First Submission Of 2008.

Admittedly, a poem isn't exactly what I'd have liked to submit first thing in 2008. I had a rant all nice and ready, which I would have preferred to have submitted, but it needed a bit more work done to it, so sorry there. Expect it another time.

If ever.

But yeah, okay, a little more effort went into this one than I would have preferred, (It took me WAY too long to think of an inadequate title) but if you don't like it, fair do's, I guess.

I'm not a poet, nor do I claim to be.

This is just a descent into insanity.

Edward.

P.S: Special Thanks to for her help and advice making this poem.

Comments

ZiggyBuggy Says:

The second half of this is pretty much perfect and I enjoyed it very much.
So much I orgasm'd.
Multiple times. :)

Prepare for the feminists, the butthurt and the women's champions to come and pop a cap in yo' ass.

Or something to that extent.

Poetic Death Says:

wow.... this is really good

cheese Says:

thought provoking, good. works well. i like it.

Prototype Says:

Humor ftw.

Allaeriel Says:

TITS OR GTFO!

:3