Twas the night...

by Shutaboy

in Completed Works

Twas the night...

Twas the night before Christmas and all was well
Dressed in camo with weapons at the ready
Unknowing of what might come of this Hell
From the darkness comes a truck with a bit surprise
With only enough time to shout out, “OH FUCK!”
Once he had found the hidden surprise
In a white flash it had begun once again
A sudden clash broke out with screams of pain and fear
Soon all was silent just as it was before
Looking about to see the damage the sun began to rise
Higher it rose to make the carnage more clearly seen
Twas the day of Christmas and all was not well in this slice of Hell…

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Jan 23rd 2008
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dark and horror
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This is my FIRST time doing something that ryems. If you can see anything that needs a little bit of a touch up on please PM me with the orignal and the fix ups with it. Thank you.

Comments

Shadow Dinosaur Says:

what a twist to the tale. woah

lovetornwolf Says:

... interesting... The only writting skill I have is that I can rhyme pretty well REALLY quickly. I love poetry, but I feel weird posting it...

AbeIsGreat Says:

cool