Revised obsession

by Afro Bear

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Revised obsession

something only turns into an obsession when it becomes unhealthy.
At first it can just be a want, but then it develops
from that want into something unhealthy over time
as the obsession grows stronger day by day,
as you grow madder trying to fill it unsuccessfully.

but this is just an opinion
take it as you will
if you feel it is true,
then my answer should be enough for you
if you feel it is false,
then on you may look for the answer that calls.

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Jan 20th 2008
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afro bear experimental free verse general human nature transgressive
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so I randomly wrote a comment in poem and thought it looked pretty good in comparison to the first one, but tell me what you think.

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TheMadi Says:

Damnit Man! Stop being so good at poetry!!!
It makes me feel inadequate.

Kuceman Says:

Man Dana you really know how to surprise people with your poetry.