Junior Brawlers, Prolougue

by Mizu Rakahasi

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Junior Brawlers, Prolougue

Ten years after the great victory of the Goen Brawlers over the Demi-God Garuru the United Planets placed the Goen Brawlers into history books for their maraculious deeds. The Brawlers, though origionally independant fighters, were absorbed by the United Planet Defence Corps. and soon after that the team dispersed. A few of the Brawlers, namely Mizu Rakahasi, Rena Souf, Phayne, Trento Liken, Shadowfang, Sparky Jolt, Raichutwo Jolt, and Raja Kouski, joined back together to create the Jounior Brawlers of the United Planets, a group where volunteers are hand picked by the overall leader, Phayne, then distributed to each of the senior brawlers from the Garuru Campaign and trained to become Brawlers themselves. Through various challenges and trainings plus assignments where the Jounior Brawlers are to grow or fail, and if they failed they would gain no benifits other than what they learned unless accepted into a Graduated Brawler's team, if they succeed they would become the leaders of the next generation of Brawlers.
> 'meme thingy' by Mizu Rakahasi

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Jan 11th 2008
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yeah, this is what is was asking for help with. SPEAK UP PEOPLES I STILL NEEDS HELP MAKING A CHARECTER AND IM PLANNING ON PUTTING SOME OF YOU IN IT!
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Commisar Snowball Says:

Nice prolouge. And every team needs that quite guy everyone thinks is dumb, even tho hes acully a genious, but is afraid cuase hes also a friggin power house of muscle. Or the sarcastic guy. =3

JellyFish Says:

Yay for Sparky! Good prologue! Can't wait for the story. I can't really help with the character thing, but me likesh teh idea in the first coment *pokes it* it's goood

HeartlessWarrior Says:

I think every team needs a gentle giant, one who doesn't like to fight, normally holds back, kind of a quiet big guy, because everyone sees him as weird, but when you mess with the innocent, he totally unleashes and kicks some major butt. I also think every team needs an alcoholic who practices some form of drunken boxing, but when he's sober, he's a complete wuss with weak wrists who likes to run his mouth off. kind of like a drunken Dr. Jeckil and Mr. Hyde. also, there should be one guy who can literally make anything into a weapon. give him a marshmallow? makeshift decoy. teddy bear? he puts it in water and uses it as a mace. cds? ninja stars. Magazine? a short club. etc. the catch is, he can't use regular weapons properly, due to not having much training. also, just for the heck of it, an older, incredibly sarcastic ill-tempered man with incredible streetfighting skills, and an overinflated ego. the catch? he's hotheaded.