The arm is much too short, as is how far the face sticks out. Her chin should be in line with her forehead. The butt also doesn't look right, though I'm not sure exactly how it should be. Don't get me wrong, there are things I like about this; mainly that you showed the musculature in the shoulder and the shape of the breast is a natural half-circle, as opposed to a gravity-defying sphere that most people draw. You have a lot to work on, but it's a good start.
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NinJaco Says:
º////////º oh my, nice
giascle Says:
The arm is much too short, as is how far the face sticks out. Her chin should be in line with her forehead. The butt also doesn't look right, though I'm not sure exactly how it should be. Don't get me wrong, there are things I like about this; mainly that you showed the musculature in the shoulder and the shape of the breast is a natural half-circle, as opposed to a gravity-defying sphere that most people draw. You have a lot to work on, but it's a good start.